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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I agree with the hair thing, It needs more detail and texture to actually look like hair
Also, I think you should look at some tank top references, because the folds do not seem to make much sense
Regarding the shading, I can't say much but be careful with the light origin, because the shading in his face looks like the light comes from the left (his right) but the shading in the neck and below looks like it's coming from the right
Good luck
Ahah, yeah. I definitely havent finished that part.
True, it doesn't, although, I just kinda sketched up a general outline for the shirt xD;; I still need to make final modifications in every part of the drawing. I think the curve lines go down a bit too far, but again, the lineart is totally sketchy, except for the facial features, which is really the only part of the lineart are pretty close to completion.
Oh, wow. I hadn't even noticed with the shading LOL;; I see. The shading you see on the right of his face is also to shadow his hair.
Thank you for all the advice! You too~
I don't think that they go too far, it's that it's not how they are supposed to look
No problem, I'm glad to help
Right. I see what your saying, but again, it's a really really really rough lineart. I haven't even done the official lineart yet, and i just put that line in there to help remind me that arms arent flat, even if you aren't muscular, like me aha, there is still that slight curve inwards and then out again about six inches down from your shoulder.